What Works Well?
- I think that the dark blue text works really well overlaying light blue because it sets it back a little. It does't appear quite as bold as it does in my other images (where it overlays white/ yellow).
- I also think that having the bottle on its side is an interesting way of reproaching the same idea. I like that the milk tipping out of the bottle now fills the same shape as the smoke did in my other images. I also like that the milk fills the bottom portion of the circle, almost as if it is being caught by a glass.
What isn't Working?
- I don't like the image where the carton is blue because it overwhelms the face. The face is much clearer as the darker colour and it makes more sense for the inside of the mouth to be darker than the face.
- When the text is centred at the top of the image it looks unbalanced because it comes too close to the side of the bottle on the left of the image. It looks better slightly off centre - it appears more even and balanced.
- I don't think that it is clear that the carton contains milk (because thee is no space to write it on the carton). I could change the caption to 'Put the milk back in the fridge' but this is less punchy.
How am I going to Move Forward?
- Whoo!! Designs - finished. Need to print for crit (use top right image - put blue frame around boarder).
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